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There's a pit that I fell into
I'm still falling, it's so deep
And I cannot stop this tumbling
Cause the walls are smooth and steep

It has made me lose my vision
Only one thing I see clear
It was Her that made me stumble
she made all else disappear

She keeps pulling ever stronger
It's a force too fierce to fight
It's persistent, not relenting
Always pulling, day and night

And that pit is getting warmer
Ever hotter while I fall
There is no way of escaping
If I wanted that at all

For it's Her that made me tumble
From the edge, way up above
And I hope I'll fall forever
In this pit they call In Love

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Written by paulus
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