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A Second-Guesser’s Love Poem

"Does a woman prefer honesty or hyperbole when a man proclaims his love?"

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I could say that your eyes were like the brightest sparkling jewels!
Or just that they are pretty like your face.
I could proclaim your bearing as magnificent and queenly!
Or just that you do have a bit of grace.

I might observe that your long hair was golden.
As brilliant as the full bright mid-day sun!
Or I could just say that it looked quite lovely.
That seeing it or touching it was fun.

I could sigh that your skin felt just like velvet!
Or note that it is wonderful to touch.
I could announce your kiss completes my being!
Or that I like to kiss you very much.

I don’t know which approach will make you happy.
If you prefer the simple or the grand.
So I’ll state now without you I would perish!
Or at least that life would certainly be bland.

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Written by rantingsenior
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