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A (Perfect) Date Gone Wrong

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Lips. They open and say nothing, giggling instead.

Then a brain fuzziness.

Then nothing.

Then a bed and her brain is foggy and she has a migraine.

His breath smells of alcohol, wafting into her face from the right.

Then she notices a bit of dry blood on the sheet below her and between her thighs.

Then running.

Then chasing.

Then screaming.

Then police.

Finally, crying.

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Written by Colors_of_the_Wind
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Comments

Chilling stuff. The premise may be simple, but that's what is so good about it. Because it is so well written, it drives the message home.
'Why' what, burnt?
Short but very well described. Great job.
Unknown User
Absolutely terrifying
Well done.