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VanessaFinaughty
Over 90 days ago
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Quote by CKAcres
I only started writing about 10 months ago, with the encouragement and help of a wonderful friend.

I have found a release through writing, that I never knew existed before.

I really enjoy learning or should I say trying to learn all of the dos and don't s.


Writing is a fantastic release, for sure. I'm half convinced that many writers would be serial killers or another type of sociopath if they didn't have that release!
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Hi VanessaFinaughty,

I envy your talents and determination.
How ever, I don't envy the task of trying to keep writers from annoying editors and their readers.
By all means, please keep up the fine work though,
it's one of those jobs that some one has to do.

More power to both of you.
scooter


Hey there. It pays the bills... well, some months...
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I don't really have a lucky "thing" per se, but I can't really imagine writing without a cup of coffee and a pack of cigarettes nearby...just sayin'


I second that!
Proofread carefully to see if the author any words out.

Do not put statements in the negative form.

And don't start sentences with a conjunction.

If you reread your work, you will find on rereading that a
great deal of repetition can be avoided by rereading and editing.

Never use a long word when a diminutive one will do.

Unqualified superlatives are the worst of all.

De-accession euphemisms.

If any word is improper at the end of a sentence, a linking verb is.

Avoid trendy locutions that sound flaky.

Last, but not least, avoid clichés like the plague.
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Do you know how to use an ellipsis?


An ellipsis? That be this thing...right?

No, I have to admit I have no clue how to use one...


I can see that silly
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If I write a book, is that what I should do Al?

Where in the heck do you get all this information?

Storie's space 101 !


I've reviewed more books than I can count, many for our local newspaper, so a lot of my advice comes from experience where authors annoyed me, lol silly
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You've both provided some very handy information.

Also, the following is an example of what not to do when it comes to asking someone for a review. (I've edited out the book title so I'm not outing the author. It's not one of our members here.)

"Read my novel of short stories, The **** , on Kindle and give it critique."


It's a good idea to be polite to the person you're asking to review your work and also to provide them with a copy of the work you'd like read.


That reads like that author is telling you to review, not asking. I'd ignore a request worded like that.

It's also a good idea to make sure they enjoy the genre you wrote - there's no point in asking someone who hates romance to read and review your romance book, for example.
Both the stories I'm planning to write at the moment will fit their accepted genres. I'm going to try them out for at least one, perhaps both, stories.
A friend of mine caught some a-hole on Amazon selling her books and pocketing the money - he had the audacity to download them and sell them AS IS, without even changing the author name on the cover!
Here's a list of over 200 reviewers, most of whom take requests - be sure to read their guidelines, though. http://www.vanessafinaughtybooks.co.za/index.php?option=com_kunena&func=view&catid=15&id=1740&Itemid=172&lang=en

If you've written a review for a book you enjoyed, please feel free to share it here: http://www.vanessafinaughtybooks.co.za/index.php?option=com_kunena&func=showcat&catid=15&Itemid=172&lang=en

For those who don't know, the same review can be posted in a million places online without affecting anyone's SEO (search engine optimisation) negatively, provided you change the review's heading each time, in places where you need to include a heading.

I'll be posting more of the reviews on my site here too, over time.
I usually go for my favourite authors, but when I read random new authors, I tend to go for the ones where the cover catches my eye. They say 'never judge a book by its cover', but that's exactly what readers do. If the cover is eye-catching, I'll read the back blurb, and if that sounds interesting, I'll read the book.
I've just bookmarked this site. Thanks a mill for sharing the info, and congrats on selling your story smile
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I've heard good things about 'Relentless', but I haven't read it yet. I am an avid Dean Koontz fan, but I've not had much time for reading over the last few months. I will try to get my hands on a copy, you've whet my appetite.


You'll enjoy it a thousand times more than the average reader, because you're a writer and will be able to relate VERY well to the main character! I could see myself reacting the way Cubby did in many instances, LOL.
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I go away, have my cry, and then ask myself, do I think the comment has truth? If yes, what am I going to do about it? If no, who shall I ask to check it with?


I think it's up to you to decide whether or not the comment has truth...the fact that someone points something out simply means that aspect caught their attention for better or worse, and what you do with that info is again up to you...

I totally agree with what you said about it being "one person's opinion" and I try to impress that upon people often, whether it's a critique, rejection notice from a publisher, etc...and you know what they say about opinions...

And I do sincerely believe people should be honest with their critique, but again, one person saying that your writing is "total rubbish" won't make it so any more than me saying my car is a new Bentley would make it so...

Did that make sense? And yeah, if you catch a big enough "fishy" make sure you fry it up for the rest of your friends here...


If the critiquer tells you why they think something doesn't work or isn't all that great, that's what helps improvement. I don't believe in telling someone their book is rubbish - lack of tact tends to make people deaf to what you're saying, which won't help them, and means that you've wasted your time critiquing. Tact plus reasons for your opinions are what really help a writer.
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For those who submit their work here, what type of feedback are you hoping for with your stories and poems?

And when you do receive constructive criticism how do you really feel about it? Do you prefer the kind of feedback that makes you think or is a general comment more along the lines of what you're expecting?

For those who are here to read, do you hold back on your comments and mainly give praise due to worrying about hurting the writer's feelings?


I've just joined and am not sure if I'll post any actual stories here, but I'll say that I don't think public critique is entirely helpful to authors. When you know that the world can see the comments made, you tend to feel as if you have to defend your book. Now, this is a feeling most writers will have regardless of how they receive the critique, but, if it's private feedback, it's a lot easier to sit back and look at the facts and statements made without worrying about the world's opinions.

Also, the purpose of critique in this case is to help the author to improve their work, not to chase their potential readers away, and public critique could work in much the same way as a bad review does.

It's also easier to be honest if the feedback is private and if there are heaps of things you didn't like about the writing, then you don't feel as if you are slashing the author in public.

These are some reasons off the top of my head why I prefer private critique in cases where I personally give the reader a copy of my book, or in cases where the critique is from a critique group.
I've written a few stories in present tense, but was only happy enough with one to publish it. I quite like that one, and, because of the contents, it worked pretty well, I think. As you say, it's good to experiment, because it definitely improves writing style and skill, and it also helps you to discover exactly what you prefer, from experience and not from other people's opinions.

As far as confusing tenses with regards to references to the past, that's not so hard once you figure out how. It works exactly the same way as normal tense, except that you wouldn't have words like 'had' when writing in present tense, but would use 'was' instead (when referring to the past).
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There was a similar thread not long ago over in a FB writing group I'm in...if I recall, the general consensus was that the main thing was being consistent...one writer said she was used to writing in past tense, but wanted to write a story in present tense but that she found herself falling back into past tense...

That's when your problems begin, because you confuse the reader...same with switching POV, the main thing is being consistent throughout the story...


That's why you need an editor ;-)
Koontz is one of my all-time favourite authors and a literary inspiration to me.

Title: Relentless
Author: Dean Koontz
Publisher: Harper Collins
Reviewer: Vanessa Finaughty

Expect Dean Koontz’s usual fast pace in this thriller, which includes a good dose of humour, making Relentless a definite must-buy.

This one will be of particular interest to writers and reviewers, as the protagonist, writer Cubby Greenwich, is stalked by a brutal, sociopathic book reviewer who seems to be intent on proving that sticks and stones can indeed break bones, although it all starts with a single word: doom.

When Cubby reads Shearman Waxx’s review of his latest novel, he obsesses about the critic’s comments, largely because Waxx clearly didn’t actually read his book. Everyone tells Cubby to let it go, and even his son’s strange dog, Lassie, seems to echo this sentiment, but this proves difficult to do.

A not-so-chance meeting with Waxx leads to a frightening chain of events that forces Cubby and his family to flee their home, leaving them with no idea how to save themselves. Waxx relentlessly pursues, and his ability to find them anywhere is almost supernatural. It soon becomes clear that Waxx is not working alone.

If you think one sociopath hell-bent on destroying you is terrifying, try a group that wants your loved ones’ suffering and death, your suffering, and your death, in that order.

Relentless has Koontz’s well-known voice, along with his humour, but it’s still not quite the same as his other novels. I’m always a little disappointed when everything is wrapped up nicely at the end of a novel, which is precisely what Koontz does here. There are no important unanswered questions to ponder at the end of this one, which will please some fans and disappoint others.

However, I cannot claim overall disappointment after all the smiles, chuckles and entertainment I gained from reading this book, and its message is clear to this reader: if a mysterious someone speaks out against you – let it go! Too many words induce action, which isn’t necessarily good for one’s health.

Relentless is certainly worth the read, and, due to the addition of Milo, Cubby’s prodigy son, older teenagers may enjoy it, too.
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Am I allowed to say me?


Damn, I'm really disappointed now...I thought for sure you were going to say me...

Who told you about Stories Space anyway???


Well, I might change it to you, depending on what my beta readers for Orion's Harvest say when they give me feedback after reading. I sent it out last night, so I'm busy chewing my fingers to stumps stressing right now. I do this every time I send a book out for the first time! At the moment, though, it's still me silly
I think it depends partially on the type of story you're writing. Personally, I think you should write the tense that you prefer reading, although there are times when other tenses do work better. The only thing with present tense is that it's not a natural way of speaking, so it's harder to get it right the whole way through.