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How do you name your characters? Do their names just come to you, or do you agonize over the decision?

How much and what type of research do you do when selecting names?

Has a name chosen early in the writing ever influenced your decisions about a character's behavior later in the story?

Have you renamed characters after you get to know them better, even if you're well into the story?

Have you ever renamed or wanted to rename characters after publication?
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I usually take the names for my characters from people that I know in real life...for instance, I have used the names Pete and Joe quite a few times because they happen to be friends of mine...I've also put them in a couple stories as actual characters...ie: they are their actual selves...my friend Joe Malgeri is a good example, he is in a story some here may be familiar with called "Your Eyes"...as himself...the story is not on this site because it is an erotic story, but it is the first story of mine that got any real acknowledgement...it was featured in a newsletter over on Writing.com, which is the biggest writing site on the net (UEN Erotica Writer's Newsletter No. 149 Oct. 13, 2009)...and the editor of the newsletter is a professional Hollywood screenwriter btw...shortly afterwards it received an Editor Pick on a popular red erotic story site...

There is a female lead character in that story, a folk singer named Cheryl Conroy...I needed a name for a singer/songwriter...the first that popped into my mind was Cheryl Crow...I changed her last name to Conroy, which is my friend Pete's last name...

As far as erotic stories go, I generally try to pick names that are not shared by other members of the site I'm writing for...for instance, my story here "Sexual Healing" was originally written for an erotic story site...I had started the story using Sue as the name of the main character, but changed it later after realizing there is a popular member of the site I was writing for with that name (Sue Eastwood)...so, I changed the name of the main character to Nancy...

Little did I know I would start going out with a girl named Nancy about six weeks later...but, that's a whole other story...

As far as the names influencing the character's behavior or anything, I would have to say no...as you can see, my name choices are pretty arbitrary...

There is one instance where I did name a character in a poem called "Johnny And Mary" after someone on a site I was writing for...again, it was an erotic story site, and the poem doesn't appear here...

A girl named Mary sent me a rather touching note about my writing while I was in the middle of writing that one...I can't recall what name I was using in the poem before though...
I once knew a drinker who had a moderating problem...

How do you name your characters? Do their names just come to you, or do you agonize over the decision?

A bit of both. For Interactive Banking, First Run of the Day, If Ignorance is Bliss, and some of the erotica I've written, the names came to me quite naturally. At other times, it's been a puzzler, and in some stories, the characters aren't given names, notably in The Raft and the Ephemeral series. Not giving the characters names works in those stories, but it wouldn't in all cases.

I do fret a bit about the names, though, because they need to be just right.

How much and what type of research do you do when selecting names?

Either the names come to me quite easily or I sometimes need to review lists of names for inspiration. Often I resort to a web-site with lists of names for babies, especially those that give the meaning of the names. I find the meanings interesting per se, but mainly want to avoid names that are inappropriate. I'm not looking for names that paint a portrait of the character or that might seem to be heavily symbolic of a particular trait.

The sound of the name is important to me, and whether or not it can be shortened for the good of the story to an affectionate diminutive. In cases like that, it can be a tool for me, as a writer, to use to good purpose.

I'll also ask a few select people for suggestions, and have received some very helpful hints by doing so.


Has a name chosen early in the writing ever influenced your decisions about a character's behavior later in the story?


Yes, it has.

Have you renamed characters after you get to know them better, even if you're well into the story?

I ran into a problem when writing First Run of the Day. The two male characters both had really good names, but the story wasn't moving forward. Something wasn't quite right, and I took a break from working on it. When I went back to it, I realised right away that the names I'd assigned the characters were inversed, so Trevor became William, and William, Trevor. It was smooth sailing after that.

Have you ever renamed or wanted to rename characters after publication?


So far, no, and I try to avoid using the same names from one story to another when they are not part of a series. I also avoid using the names of people I know or family members; it's just not a good idea.
How do you name your characters? Do their names just come to you, or do you agonize over the decision?

Sometimes they come to me easily, but other times I have to search extensively for just the right name.

It can be a great help to ask others for suggestions too. In my recent story "Writer's Block," Gypsy named the male lead, and my husband named the cat and dog.

How much and what type of research do you do when selecting names?

Having an idea of what year the story takes place, as well as the approximate ages of the characters, I search for popular names from their birth years. This helps guard against accidental name anachronism. Unless the intention was for a character to have an out-of-place name, it would be odd to have a hot 20-something named Mildred, for instance.

Has a name chosen early in the writing ever influenced your decisions about a character's behavior later in the story?

Not that I recall...

Have you renamed characters after you get to know them better, even if you're well into the story?

Yes, I have. All of the characters in The End and The Crèche started out with different names.

Have you ever renamed or wanted to rename characters after publication?

No, I usually get that sort of hand-wringing done before publication.
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Interesting questions, which I shall try to answer fully:

How do you name your characters?

Sometimes I have a clear idea of what I want my characters to be called, others, no idea at all and just pluck one from the air at random.

Do their names just come to you, or do you agonize over the decision?

As said before, sometimes the names just come to me. Like in my Random Moment series, I was writing it, guided by the story itself and the characters just felt like they were called Rufus and Cynthia. Amy is based on an actual ghost in my own house called Amy. It is how I'd imagine her to be if she was grown up and able to talk. Mrs Hatfield (Rufus's mother) was one that I agonised over. I stared into space for ages trying to think of her name and then it came to me to call her Mrs Hatfield because I was listening to Metallica and the lead singer is called James Hetfield, so I just changed the second letter. Her first name then came to me from her second name and I never wanted to switch.

How much and what type of research do you do when selecting names?

I do very little research. I sometimes use baby name websites to find their meanings and see if they fit with the story. One time I used a forum on the other site to help me decide on a name. Another time I polled Facebook friends.

Has a name chosen early in the writing ever influenced your decisions about a character's behavior later in the story?

Yes, weirdly. I've currently got a story in production where the main character is very much influenced by his name. Sometimes it's just a minor thing like the character making a pun about their name. The one that comes to mind is when my character was called Steele. It was an erotic story, so you can imagine the quite obvious pun. Sure, it was a cliché to say that Steele was hard as steel, but it had to be done.

Have you renamed characters after you get to know them better, even if you're well into the story?

Yes, actually I'm in the midst of renaming a male character in a story. His female counterpart is called Leah and he is called Liam. I thought they were too similar, so I'm thinking about changing his name. Lord knows what to, but I'll stumble upon something eventually. Once I read the story back, I'm sure his name will come to me.

Have you ever renamed or wanted to rename characters after publication?

I've wanted to, but never done it. I wouldn't rule it out though.
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The names of characters, especially the major ones, can be crucial. For instance, there's a famous literary/publishing story about a publisher hounding an author to change the first name of her protag. After resisting the idea for weeks, she finally relented at the last minute and agreed to change 'Pansy' to 'Scarlett O'Hara'. .

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I think that the names are really important, but mine usually come early. Since a lot of my work revolves around greek mythology, it makes naming characters easy. Most of them are spin off of greek mythology names.
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It's been tossed about Lost and broken Wandering aimlessly
And God somehow You know that ship is me 'Cause there's a lighthouse
In the harbour Shining faithfully Pouring its light out Across the water
For this sinking soul to see That someone out there Still believes in me
On a prayer, in a song I hear your voice and It keeps me hanging on Raining down Against the wind
I'm reaching out till We reach the circle's end When you come Back to me again
I've noticed a somewhat annoying trend in my writing, and that is, the names I give my characters sometimes sound similar to each other, or start with the same letter, or end in the same sound. I often wonder if this confuses readers. It sometimes confuses me when I'm writing, at which point, I usually rename one of them.
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Naming a character is often important, but seldom crucial. Main characters, especially in novellas and novels, should usually have strong and distinctive names. Some authors like to give secondary characters a unique name since less time is normally spent developing their personality and a notable name can help bring them to life.

Maggie's research into popular names 'back when' is a good idea even if the story setting is contemporary. In 40 years are so, there may be a slew of grannies name "Katelynn' but at the moment that might strike current readers as a bit odd. ;)

Bottom line is there are no hard and fast rules. For instance, I believe it was Mr. Martini who said he often uses names of friends and that works for him. Me, I'd never, ever do that since I want, need, characters with no baggage except what they get from me.

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How do you name your characters? Do their names just come to you, or do you agonize over the decision?

How much and what type of research do you do when selecting names?

Has a name chosen early in the writing ever influenced your decisions about a character's behavior later in the story?

Have you renamed characters after you get to know them better, even if you're well into the story?

Have you ever renamed or wanted to rename characters after publication?


I personally think that a character's name is one of the most important elements of the story. I cannot, for instance, imagine having a Superhero named Cecil Larkspur (cool sounding name, nonetheless ) where I can imagine having his real name as something like Scott Cartwright.

I do agonise over names - the two examples just used didn't just 'come' to me - and, yes, I have used a name all the way through a story as I've been writing it only to change it on re-read or during the editing process. If a names 'jars' when you read it in the text of the story, there is probably something not right about it.

I do think character names influence - though not dictate - how that character behaves in the story. Using my two examples above, I could not see dear ol' Cecil jumping in to save the day if a crisis loomed, whereas Scott would be there like a shot, a la Bruce Willis in the Die Hard movies

I tend to shy away from using real names for the simple reason that that person's personality traits, quirks and faults may end up in my story, albeit unintentionally. My characters are all original and newly formed from the cess-pit of my imagination

I have crreated names I love and some I am not so keen on in retrospect -- but not enough to go back and completely change them. My biggest naming error is in my three-part story "The Trials of Adam Gurney". I dislike the title (always have) and dislike the surname of Adam and his dad. I changed it once --then changed it back again! It's been with me so long that story I'm kinda fond of its imperfections.
I had to come back and edit my earlier comment. It's true most of the time, but sometimes I have characters that need a name that strengthens the perception I want the reader to have. Right now I'm working on a supernatural novel. I actually did some research to find names in my character's native language and time period with meanings that culture would easily recognize.

I do believe that names should strengthen the story line. I don't make up names. I hate when parents do that in real life, unless it is a functional part of the story line. Names can also distract.

This one is one a student in my Summer program came up with: L--a.
At first, I was like "What?" But, her character is basically illiterate and that's her mark.
The character's name is L'dasha. The kids I work with are preteens. I had to laugh
because she had the right idea about names. I had to bite my tongue and not say,
"A dash and a hyphen are two different things." LOL
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This one is one a student in my Summer program came up with: L--a.
At first, I was like "What?" But, her character is basically illiterate and that's her mark.
The character's name is L'dasha. The kids I work with are preteens. I had to laugh
because she had the right idea about names. I had to bite my tongue and not say,
"A dash and a hyphen are two different things." LOL


That is very funny!


I like to use names as Easter eggs sometimes.
In my present story I have an Italian engineering chief named Alessandro Mendini. Alessandro Mendini is a world renown Italian architectural engineer.
Also Christina Hülsmeyer is an electronics specialist and works on the tadar system. Christian Hülsmeyer was a German inventor and entrepreneur who is often credited with the invention of radar.

I like to make sure that the names my characters have fit into their cultural and family background. Like giving a Russian sounding name to a character with Asian features, because the father was Russian and the mother Asian.

For less important characters I sometimes steal names from literature or entertainment. My wife and I wrote a story that had three college friends.
Theirs names where Moses 'Harry' Horowitz, Louis Feinberg, and Jerome Horowitz. In days gone by they were called in vaudeville; Moe, Larry and Curly.

I try to make the names make sense, but I like to have fun with them too.
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names are important, since my book is set in a strange world where there is no technology I have tried to use old names, so they seem to fit better. Some are Celtic, some are old English some are Asian and some I made up (different races have different name origins)
I also have tried to put friends names in the book but have changed them just a touch, i.e. I have a friend called Tiff and another called Rich, so in the book they became Tiffa & Ricardo, I have also tried to avoid names which people would relate to tv or other books, i.e. Zeena, who became Zeanith.

I have renamed a few characters after I get to know them as I would hope people get attached to them and there old name didn't seam to fit.

Orcs and trolls have simple names i.e. Narg, Grilk, Tog. Noble men and women have long fancy names, i.e. Sebastian, Darcarial, Vladimir.
Lawmen have Strong Names i.e. Zeanith, Erkut, Marchel. and town people have a good mix depending on where they come from, i.e. Reath, Vorn, Uma, Valery
The Lead has one of my favourite Celtic names... Lowenna

I think names can show status and can help readers connect with the character.
I am in the process of writing a period piece (my 'Going Away' series) set from the early years of the twentieth century through to the latter years. It would be foolhardy of me to have characters named Kylie and such for the earlier years when names like Maggie, Doris, Mabel, Charles, Harold and Albert were more common. If you are writing a story that is set in a particular period of history then names have to be 'period appropriate', surely?