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Poetry challenge: Use the last line first.

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And loving you has broken my heart in two
Elixir of love the brew while being held by you
Intoxication of the heart worth the pain I knew
Dreaming of the day we met and feelings grew
Longing for your gentle touch and a kiss or two
"No one knows when the final grain of sand will plummet through their own personal Hourglass." ~ CKAcres
"If you really want to make a difference, don't over think it, just do it..."
"Scars of life are deeply etched within the minds of curious old souls."
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Longing for your gentle touch and a kiss or two
I will wait forever for you
Longing for a caressing breath and a moment or two
to show my love for you
~purple addict~
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To show my love for you..
I must break the chain of fear..
To let go of everything I once knew..
And do what I must to keep you here..
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And do what I must to keep you here
What must i do?
And so what I must to keep you here
I will do.

(it sucks i know)
~purple addict~
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And do what I must to keep you here
What must i do?
And so what I must to keep you here
I will do.

(it sucks i know)


no it does not suck, it shows you are trying, we told you you could.
Keep trying, you can do it.
"No one knows when the final grain of sand will plummet through their own personal Hourglass." ~ CKAcres
"If you really want to make a difference, don't over think it, just do it..."
"Scars of life are deeply etched within the minds of curious old souls."
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That I love you
Leave many questions
That I love you
Bring me a smile
That I love you
Brings warmth to my heart
That I love you
Do you have any suggestions
That I love you
Can we walk another mile
That I love you
Have you known from the start
That I love you
"No one knows when the final grain of sand will plummet through their own personal Hourglass." ~ CKAcres
"If you really want to make a difference, don't over think it, just do it..."
"Scars of life are deeply etched within the minds of curious old souls."
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That I love you
Should I tell you?
That I love you
Should I dare?
~purple addict~
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should i dare
should i say a little prayer
should i add a little flair
so that my words become rare.
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so that my words become rare
they will forever add much flair
causing some to stop and stare
at the images created if you dare
words generate so much fanfare...
"No one knows when the final grain of sand will plummet through their own personal Hourglass." ~ CKAcres
"If you really want to make a difference, don't over think it, just do it..."
"Scars of life are deeply etched within the minds of curious old souls."
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Words generate so much fanfare..
But often fail us when feelings are shared..
How do you convey a love deep and true?
By simply saying "I love you?"..
It seems so pathetic, a lackluster dud..
Instead I shall write your name in my blood..
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instead i shall write your name in my blood.
where like a flower bud i can sit and watch you grow.
for then maybe my wish for your love will come true.
something so rare that two can share.
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something so rare that two can share
things can be so much better as a pair
wishes are filled all of the time to those
who never let doors of opportunity close
love of another either lover or friend
together over obstacles they transcend
paired yes a rarity both can hold true
showing real love takes away the blue
"No one knows when the final grain of sand will plummet through their own personal Hourglass." ~ CKAcres
"If you really want to make a difference, don't over think it, just do it..."
"Scars of life are deeply etched within the minds of curious old souls."
Rest in Peace
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Showing real love takes away the blue
it is true love is to be shared by two
when it is true it will shine in all kinds of hues
but one must be careful not to bruise a tender new love
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but one must be careful not to bruise a tender new love
tender new love filled with anticipation fits like a glove
first hug first kiss sending shivers and sparks between
captivating to each other better than a high on caffeine
feelings new love bring walking on air lighter than a feather
excitement the only catalyst holding this fresh love together
"No one knows when the final grain of sand will plummet through their own personal Hourglass." ~ CKAcres
"If you really want to make a difference, don't over think it, just do it..."
"Scars of life are deeply etched within the minds of curious old souls."
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excitement the only catalyst holding this fresh love together
We will be together forever and ever,
Holding close and not letting go. Never never,
Shall we let each other go,
For all I want is her and she me.
Ghosts, flamingos, guitars and vodka. Eclectic subjects, eccentric stories:

Humorous guide & Recommended Read =^.^= How To Make a Cup of Tea
A flash fiction series :) A Random Moment in Time
Editors' Pick! :D I Am The Deep, Dark Woods
And another EP!: The Fragility of Age
=^.^=
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For all I want is her and she me,
arms around each other,
her lips on mine,
heat transferred between bodies intertwined.

💓 Melissa Etheridge - PULSE ( for orlando victims ) 💓 - YouTube

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Heat transferred between bodies intertwined,
we kiss so softly, a mark of love,
The passion builds, love is made,
Together, we moan and writhe and kiss,
All I want, honestly, is this.
Ghosts, flamingos, guitars and vodka. Eclectic subjects, eccentric stories:

Humorous guide & Recommended Read =^.^= How To Make a Cup of Tea
A flash fiction series :) A Random Moment in Time
Editors' Pick! :D I Am The Deep, Dark Woods
And another EP!: The Fragility of Age
=^.^=
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All I want, honestly, is this
This warm hand in mine
Those beautiful eyes finding mine
That warm embrace in the middle of the night
Keeping me safe, feeling loved
All I want is you.
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All I want is you..
Nothing more can mean so much..
I've done everything I can do..
To seek your loving touch..
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to seek your loving touch
a dream i dream to much
a desire burning bright
a thought consuming my mind
like a kiss in the night
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Really does make me grin,
as we stand out in the rain.
Holding each other tightly,
without you I'd go insain.
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Without you I'd go insane..
Moments lost when you're not there..
I could endure the greatest pain..
If I know our lives we'll share..
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If i know our lives we'll share
we would be the perfect pair
our love would float in the air
we could live without a care
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Shoulda listened, Ted..
Even the bears need to be fed..
An arm, a leg, and maybe a head..
OMG, I think I'm dead..
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OMG, I think I'm dead,
Where as I should be breathing in stead.
but I will take it in stride,
Because your life is about to be one wild ride.
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because your life is about to be one wild ride
hurry and race the tide
for there is no place to hide
you just have to take life in stride
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You just have to take life in stride..
Survive every attack..
Stand tall and walk with pride..
Even though when you bend over they see your butt crack..