Fractured
Detective Arjan Heiko is accustomed to the darkness that lay beneath the surface of civilization.These excerpts represent the some of the key concepts covered in the story, as well as my writing style. I am looking for feedback regarding how well this communicates the story, the characters, the settings and the conversations in a believable and understandable way. Chapter 1 Excerpt “This is a shithole,” Arjan said to nobody in particular. “As most tourist traps are,” Torre agreed. Almost subconsciously he added, “but...