"Read my novel of short stories, The **** , on Kindle and give it critique."
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The picture you have posted of a pooter might be a pooter in your world, but a pooter in my world is a heavy box-like contraption
Oh, Miss Shy Person...I think I may have figured out what a pooter might be after all...and assuming your pooter was made within the last twenty years or so, it should have a microphone thingy...
Of course, not having a microphone to plug into the thingy could still present a problem...![]()
...and I've found that just shouting into that little hole doesn't work either..
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I'd love to critique some of your work Lisa,
But you haven't written anything here...):
I guess I'll have to follow you around the forums, or maybe join the critique groups..(:
Is there an entry fee?
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I don't think anyone here wants to hurt feelings so a lot of times nothing is said or false praise may be given.. this will be a good place to be honest and outspoken without being mean.. I for one won't take offense at anyone who has taken the effort to read my stuff and hopefully give me some positive feedback.. and I say positive because even if it is quite critical it is meant to be positive on your behalf.. anyways.. bring on the joust.. I expect Alan is going to tear me a new one...
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My personal favourite writing is poetry. But, while another site, I tried a short story. One of the comments was something to the effect of, 'begin a new sentence every time someone else speaks.'
That comment was due to the fact that my dialogue was contained within the same paragraph while two parties were conversing. I constantly repeat that one to myself, and I'm always up for more enlightenment.